Wanted!! trainer/rider’s for green horse’s!
Hi there , looking for 1 or 2 nice qualified trainer’s/riders for 2 green horses!! here at there home, So the horses could go out together here on huge acreage here in no sd co. if you know of a great trainer & rider, please pass this on or let me know. thanks and happy trails!!
I need to take this one apart slowly. Have the Grammar Nazis and the Punctuation Police on standby. The Speeling Bees arrived as soon as I opened the ad. Sparky starts with a score of 100.
Minus 10 for overall misuse of exclamation points.
Minus 10 for misplaces apostrophes.
Minus 2 for misleading readers as to the color of the horse.
Minus 12 for the wrong choice of there, their, and they’re.
Minus 4 for unneeded capitalization.
Minus 16 for confusing location in an already confusing ad.
Minus 4 for missing a capitalization.
Minus 20 for overuse of the word “here”.
100 minus 78 equals 22 points. I’m afraid Sparky will have to repeat Fourth Grade.